I thought your introduction was excellent! It was 3 paragraphs long (really long) ! I was suprised to here that you like Lego Ninjago, I also like this toy! Also, you were the first person to send the introduction to Coach Jen and I!
wow! i think that your introduction was beatifully written. i am much older than you and trust me i can try to write in script better than you but i know i will never succeed! i loved how you explained what your brothers names are and how old you are. i can tell from your writing that you really like tennis. i also really liked how you ended your introduction!
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You're only in second grade and already writing script so beautifully! Impressive! Coach Jen
Nice handwriting !
Hello Rachel,
I thought your introduction was excellent! It was 3 paragraphs long (really long) ! I was suprised to here that you like Lego Ninjago, I also like this toy! Also, you were the first person to send the introduction to Coach Jen and I!
Thanks for sending your introduction early!
-Asst. Coach Nicholas
I love your script. You have many great things to do!! Keep on writing!!!!!
wow! i think that your introduction was beatifully written. i am much older than you and trust me i can try to write in script better than you but i know i will never succeed! i loved how you explained what your brothers names are and how old you are. i can tell from your writing that you really like tennis. i also really liked how you ended your introduction!
Hello Rachel, it's a good piece of writing. Your hand writing is also very good. Do write more.
Hi Rachel
I think you are very neat in writing
Ryan
Rachel,
Very nice handwriting. You have to teach me that one day!
Uncle Louie
NICE WORK WRITING SCRIPT KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!!!!
ALEX
Rachel,
Your cursive is almost as good as mine:)
Mom
Hello Rachel,
You guessed correct! The emoticon is an angel. Don't tell the others the answer!
Assistant Coach Nicholas
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