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Tuesday, February 19, 2013

MY ADVICE TO HITLER by Nicholas Ng


What advice would I give Hitler to change him?

Adolf Hitler was abused as a child and that is what made him so violent. He did not have a positive bond between him and his father either. They often argued. Also, Hitler’s father did not approve his interest in art. When Hitler was 14, his father suddenly died. Because Hitler loved fine art, he tried to get into the Academy of Fine Arts twice. He was rejected both times. Out of money, he went into a homeless shelter. This incident was where he first started mentioning about how the Jews were the worst race.

Hitler initiated World War II as dictator of Germany and started the Nazis. During the German Great Depression, many people were in need of a leader. Hitler took this opportunity for his anti-Semitism campaign. In the campaign, Hitler came in second for both rounds against Paul von Hindenburg. But Hitler won more than 35% of the votes. This made Hitler a very strong force in German politics. Even though Hindenburg won, he still agreed to let Hitler take over as chancellor in order to promote political balance.

If I were giving advice to Hitler, I would tell him to treat others the way he would want to be treated. This is important because he would be kind to them. What’s good about being nice? He would gain respect from many others, gain more power, and get more people to follow him! People will respect and follow Hitler because they know he is a nice person and will do kind acts. Since he has this respect, he could easily win an election for chancellor or dictator of Germany. Also, Hitler would be known for stopping World War II!

No child like Hitler deserves to go through that much violence. Also, this advice would stop him from causing World War II and the Holocaust. I think Hitler is partially blamed for World War II. His dad influenced Hitler to become the way he was, but Hitler took his anger and revenge on the people he didn’t like. No one should do that either. 

Hitler might be bad, but we can all relate to him. When we are angry, it is easier to take our anger out on other people than to hold it in and control ourselves. This is how Hitler went on to create the Holocaust. In life, people make mistakes. Sometimes they are forgivable like breaking a glass cup. Killing massive millions of people and more is not forgivable. This is why you have to think before you act. If you think before you act, you will not get into trouble like Hitler did.


2 comments:

Coach Jen Ng said...

Nicholas,

What an outstanding expository essay! The subject you chose required deep thinking and insight, and you accomplished both. Keep writing!

Coach Jen

Anonymous said...

I totally agree with you. Hitler was a terrible being.
-Grace Tran

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