“Where I’m From”
By Grace Tran
I’m from China, Vietnam,
From Dunhua, Saigon.
I’m from mountains to seas,
A brother to eight.
Where I’m from, the grass grows green,
Exotic fruits are always seen.
My home is for three,
The gym on the fifth.
A flat screen TV on the seventh,
And pool on the fourth.
I’m from one bedroom without doors,
And way, way, way more.
Vegetarians my family,
Buddhism’s the religion.
I’m from a glowing golden statue,
And monks with flowing robes.
Where I’m from, the temple replaces church,
With a box full of fortunes,
And cushions on the floor.
I’m from a chain of chefs,
With millions of dishes.
Where I’m from, pots clink;
Then sink,
Into the cool flowing water.
I’m from soybean pork with a side of eggs,
From Soy and Saki, the “sushi-raunt”
From Candyland, to Wiily Wonka,
Plus green mint grass with peanut butter cups.
My home is not that big,
And religion not that strict.
I’m from chefs in the kitchen,
And food, food, food, food.
Where I’m from,
Where I’m from.
4 comments:
Grace, your poem has a wonderful beat with beautiful details. By the end of it, I wanted to move in and join you and your family at the kitchen table. And after dinner, I love to try one of those green mint grass peanut butter cups. : )
Grace,
I love your poem :). You described your home and culture so well and even made it rhyme! I also like that you used literary techniques such as imagery and repetition, which really develops the writing to make it better.
Your poem contains very descriptive detail about your family, your religion, the food you eat, and the environment you live in... This is a great poem for someone your age. BTW, how do you get all those lines to rhyme? :) Great job, Grace! Hope you can publish another great poem for us.
I like how you repeat "where I'm from." It definitely makes the poem more memorable
-Nicholas
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