“Attack!”
command Benjy.
This war was June 13, 2052 to June 30,
2052; a war, children against children. What war you ask? It is: THE KID WAR...
IT’S
BENJY,
SPANT, AND JOHNLY in...
THE
TROUBLE STARTS
It all started when German kids got angry.
They thought that adults had too much say in the world and kids had no say at
all. No decisions, no rights, no nothing. They soon formed the Rebelors.
When Child Senator Hans Schmitt of East
Europe heard about this, he immediately resigned.
When Senator Jack Wilson heard about
this, he got mad; he assembled the Kid Nation’s greatest senators to fight in
the upcoming war. They were:
Jamie Jones, a Baltimore baseball player
with a specialty of reckless fighting. As a toddler, he wrestled kids and
pillows.
Clay Liao or Nantou Taiwan is a boy with
a little mustache; he is very interested neuroscience.
And Branden Wang of New York City, even
though he is the youngest senator, he is the most creative one when it comes to
writing.
The headquarters for the Kid Nation was
located at the Galapagos Islands, but due to the discovery of ’42, the moved
the headquarters to the LIE exit 32E. The entrance is behind some
tall brown oak trees. Then, there are about 38 shrubs before you get to the
actual entrance. Before you enter the 1-inch thick iron doors, you have to go
past a droid who scans your finger. If a visitor has come, you say, I allow (name)
to enter this building. The headquarters looks like an upside down Dannon low
fat yogurt cup, and it was painted green due to the fire of ’50.
The senators argued for 4754890238443 seconds straight in
Argue Hall. The Argue Hall is a horseshoe shaped chamber that has an electronic
map in the middle. The room has a Pac-Man shaped table in the center with a
hologram opener in the center. In the room, there are 21 “rolly” chairs, enough
for 20 senators and Jack, which are 1 ft. off the ground with a 1.25 in. thick
cushion for the back and the seat. Then, they all agreed, it was war. All the
senators scrambled to assemble 75 kids from their hometown to fight in the
upcoming war.
Jack, Jamie, and Clay will fight with Branden’s army of 81,
James’ army of 91, Jamie’s army of 42, and Clay’s army of 75. Branden was going
to 35-36-534st Far Rockaway to recruit three kids. Who? Johnly, Spant and Benjy.
Suddenly, three-3-by-9-feet-long German kid sized jets with a wingspan
of 18 ft. flew above the base and bombed the east wing of the Kid Nation’s base
into smithereens.
Debris scattered everywhere, armor and weapons fell everywhere,
and smoke filled the air. The four senators crawled out all black ‘n blue, they
grabbed some GJEIAEE23536 water guns, but it was too late.
“OH, it’s on,” said Jack “OH, it’s on.”
TO BE
CONTINUED
6 comments:
Branden, what don't I like about chapter 3? Nothing. It is absolutely brilliant on many levels. What I enjoyed most are the interesting fine details about the senators, cushions, Argue Hall, etc. And your cliffhanger definitely leaves me hungering for more and more of Benjy, Spant, and Johnly. Absolutely magnificent!
Very interesting!! keep writing and add your other cousins too..
L.W.
Branden, I was mesmerized by your vivid description of the settings and characters. Just by reading this story, I could feel how much fun and excitement you have for writing. Dying for more please.
okey donky
-branden
WRITE MOREEEEEE, CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT ISSUE!!! XD
-grace
B: Fun reading, it looks like you had a lot of fun writing this. Senator Branden the magnificent writer, what other hidden talents are yet to be discovered? C Goo Goo
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