Zoe Eng
Dancing Snowflakes
Snowflakes slowly drifting down,
Like a white soft blanket covering the ground.
No two snowflakes are ever the same,
Gliding through the air, floating like a flame.
Sticking out my tongue to catch a snowflake,
Although refreshing, it gave me a stomachache! L
Inspired by Clouds
6 comments:
Very discriptive poem Zoe! I love your exquisite showing of you eating a snowflake as they slowly come down.
Nicholas
I liked how you put a simile with snow as a white soft blanket.
Victor
Hi Zoe!
Cute Poem!I like how it rhymed and that you could picture it in your head. :)
Zoe,
Your choice of project is the most daring, writing a poem, as no other classmates attempted to write. Your surprise ending made me laugh with delight!
Coach Jen
Zoe,
Beautiful poem. I used to do the same thing when I was child trying to catch snowflakes with my tongue.... That's fun.
Harumi (Charlie's mom)
You painted a vivid picture with clever choice of words, Zoe.
Great job!
Love,
Mom
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